Score: 10

"Not bad."

submission: Mr toilet paper

date: August 14, 2008

Good job man. Not bad for your first drawing movie. I like how you did good with the animation. But the one flaw was the ending. Seriously, it just went to the credits when the paper said "OMG". You could have created a better ending than that. But, not much of a huge flaw. Good Job. Hope to see what your next drawing movie will be.

Score: 10

"ME!!!!"

submission: Awesome Racer

date: August 9, 2008

I want some milk, Goddamnit!!!!

Score: 9

"Nice."

submission: SSBB Collab

date: July 17, 2008

Well, I forgot about this collab for some time. it was pretty good. it's good to be looking back at my orginal work. The Sprite TV 3 collab will be coming out soon. Maybe in a week.

Score: 6

"Meh..."

submission: RandomMarioTime6

date: April 13, 2008

Well, It's hard for me say wheather this is right or stupid. There are some parts that are out of shape.

1. Why did that 8-bit mario soon got replaced by a 16-bit mario then turn back into another 8-bit mario?
2. Where did you get that dancing Vegeta?
3. Why are the sprites so horrible except for the kongs?
4. Why did you use many sound clips from Family Guy?
5. Why are Mario and Snake running?

Well. There are some things you need to work on. First is the sprites. In all of your movies, the sprites that you mostly use looked like they were ripped from MS paint. If you ripped the from paint, they would be in JPEG format. I sugest using a tool I use called "Adobe Photoshop". You can ripped sprites and make them clean and good looking too. Though is not easy as paint.
Also, you need some more effort. Take your time of making these. It takes me like 2 weeks jst to make a 2 minute animation.
One more thing, Make your own humor. The only humor you use were sound clips from "Family Guy". Please, make something else beside "Family Guy". Choose like "Futurama" or "South Park" or something. Family Guy is old now. The jokes aren't funny anymore.

Hope this will help you in the future.

Score:
Humor: 60%
Animation: 65%
Effort: 60%
Total: 61.6 D-

Sorry.

Score: 3

"Well."

submission: Vegetas Final Flash

date: January 19, 2008

There are some problems with the flash.
1. You need to more effects into this.
2. Try to put some other animation into the characters, like make the move up and down when Vegeta is planning his final flash.
3. Try to put a bit more story into this.
4. It DBZ. They done this crap a billion times and it's starting to get old.

Well, good flash anyway.

Score: 9

"Well..."

submission: SBC's Cookie Clockmas!

date: December 25, 2007

It was okay. Merry Christms. Here's your score:

Animation: 85: swift movement, good sounds.
Humor: 75: Okay humor.

Score: 4/5, 87 B+

Score: 10

"Awesome, man."

submission: Awesome Guy Adventures

date: November 17, 2007

Congrats on the movie you made. I'm surpised how you manage to do well since you finished the Twomps movie. First off, the graphics and 2.5-D effects were fast and clean, the humor was funny, but not as funny as the Twomps. I like the part where the moon hits Yoshi's Island, SUPER PWNAGE!! Well, anyway, the movie was awesome, that's why it's called "Awesome guy Adventures". I'm gonna need a lot more practice so that I'll become almost a great flash animatior like you. Anyway, take care.

Score: 9

"Really funny"

submission: Arnie's Accidents

date: November 1, 2007

I like watching "Arnie's Adventure" from Randy Solem. This is even more funny! 5 is better than 3.

Score: 10

"Not bad."

submission: Mario's Last Battle

date: November 1, 2007

This is a cool battle. Nice use for the 8-bit sprites.

Score: 10

"SBC is funny!"

submission: The Truth About Clockmas

date: October 18, 2007

First is"SBC plots frontpage" and now this. hallious! I put him in my sprite TV! 2 movies. It's about SBC working at Burger King at killing Nutaro. This is like a tribute to you, Rupeeclock, because you are an awesome flash artist.